The final round
Of editing
Feels like
That sprint
When your lungs burn
And your legs wobble
And you can see the finish line,
But are gasping for hope and energy.
To undo
What took so long to do
Seems counterproductive.
In fact,
Such editing
Adds a patina
Of possibility
That was lost
In the plethora
Of prose.
Ah, Lord,
You, too,
Edit me.
You fix typos
And point out
Inconsistencies.
You invite me to more
By becoming less.
Edit away, Lord,
That I might be
A fine story
For Your glory.
© Lane Arnold
go lane, go. i am proud of you and all that you do. i love you.
Thanks, honey.